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This is the story I was meaning Wab - The introduction of 'X'

To me, MagnumRoma have been the best of legends but have not shown monsters so lets bring out some huge ones and see what might happen ... lets look at this and I dont care what anyone will think about it, its just my oppinion ...

Fog appears out of no where and a mythical creature comes out of the mist. It doesnt howl, it doesnt look like a Wyvern and you see its Agnetha. She points a gun at your head. "Imperialist, your dead. Dont you dare muck around with me and my friends" Agnetha hisses angrily. You stop. She looks like a cowboy from the dead. Her rotten outfit outshines anyone and you see she could be a Undead Cowboy. You see a image then of Imperialist strangling Agnetha. "Dont you dare" Mark_Antony says. "This is due to what she did" Imperialist says. "What did she do?" a figure says walking up. "She made me hated" Imperialist hisses. "You did it of your own accord Imperialist" Boudicca says. Imperialist strangles Agnetha still nearly cutting out her blood supply. Your vision is suddenly red and black, like it is meant to happen. Suddenly a figure walks out of the mists towards him. "You. Stop what your doing" the figure says. "I am angry at her" Imperialist says. You stop and see more images. The image of the figure appears there. "Calm down" the figure says. "She made me nearly strangle her to death. I hate her. She winds me up" Imperialist says. "But she doesnt deserve to die. Shes keeping MagnumRoma alive, all of us are but she does not deserve to die" the figure says and you see the figure fully. You see the figure is a skeleton. Sybil has a bottle of tomato sauce in one and she squeezes it all over Imperialist by accident. "You" Imperialist says. "It wasn't her fault" Agnetha says standing up. "It was so. She squirted it all over me" Imperialist says. "She has a disorder when she just must squeeze it on enemies of The Romans" Agnetha says and gets it all. "I am not an enemy of The Romans" Imperialist says. "A future one" Agnetha says. "What did you say?" Imperialist says. The skeleton walks out. "Doesnt matter" Agnetha says. Imperialist walks up to Agnetha. "Repeat what you said now to me" Imperialist says. "Like I said, it doesnt matter" Agnetha says. Imperialist grabs Agnethas neck in a deathlike grip and he makes it tighter. "It matters to me" Imperialist says. "Enough" Theodoric says and he sees it all. "I said it matters" Imperialist says angrily. Mark_Antony sees it all and Boudicca sees it all. Antillia sees it all and they didnt expect it. Antillia suddenly gets it. "Let go of Agnethas neck now Imperialist" Antillia says. Agnethas vision goes black and you see a image of Sybil then. "Now you have learnt my fate. I also do it to idiots. Imperialist is an idiot to me" Sybil says and she has a bottle of tomato sauce. "Why?" you suddenly think. "Well, you can see why cant you? But the mystery still remains. Whos the skeleton?" Sybil says. "You dont know who it is?" you think. "No. No one knows who it is but its definatly a him. Thats as far as we can tell" Sybil says. The image of Sybil suddenly dissapears and the male skeleton walks out of the mists. The mists dissapear a bit. He has a few cowboy guns hanging on his hips. His skin is seethrough and you see his blood flowing through his body. Part of it is not seen but you see his heart beating and his lungs breathing. He gives a kind of cowboy smile and you see hes kinda a Cowboy Skeleton. He looks at you. "Pardon me, permit me to introduce myself. My name is X" the Skeleton Cowboy says and winks.

The question I think youd try and ask me is whos X? Well, Im afraid that cant be revealed yet for only few people will know who X is but most will not. This is X's first appearance in my stories too. Learning about him I felt hed make a great Cowboy Skeleton, one of the first but like Merlae I think. Imperialist, Id like to say this, you will make a great enemy every time you annoy me or make me argue with you. Id just like to point that out. You may be a member of MagnumRoma but it doesnt mean I like you. To those in the story like Antillia, Boudicca, Sybil, Theodoric and Mark_Antony, I like you more than Imperialist at this time and you know why. Thats all I want to say to anyone and I hope you enjoy the story, especially X, who ever he may be.

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interesting jumps back and forth between first and and third person I find first person to be a little unsettling to me most of the time... so i try to do third more
 

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