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Death Ticket

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Okay here is a possible future which could happen sometime in the next 4 decades maybe? or not?

DEATH TICKET

part 1

The 4 messengers robes burned white like the sun, the people in look up into Zions evening sky and screamed danger, and began to run. Groceries were flopped and toys were dropped, children were snatched and thrown into cars, and horns blared in traffic jams, converging on the air fields near and far. But not everyone was running like chickens in fear, 1 by 1 families and friends came out of houses and stood quietly looking up at the dark sky, holding the hands of those they held dear. Each 1 held a large ticket glowing in hand, 2 languages inscribed, one flowery and strange, the other earth and quite bland. They said if you could read them true, you have won the right to die by the hand of earth, and Darwins Revenge comes for you.
All was quiet acrossed the fair land, except for the soft murmurings of little girls and boys to their Mamas and Popas, asking if death was at hand. Soon the last softly glowing pearl white cherubim space ship had fled, and screaming out of the darkness came Darwins Revenge, Black as Death his name painted in blood red, (Darwin's Revenge!), Out her black hold a foul rain of Atom and neutron bombs fell, and all the glittering delicate sapphire, and diamond towers of Zion, were turned to shattered and jagged burning Hell.
Down from the ship earths evil men came to pick through the charred flesh of Heavens Holy dead in the ruins, and for 2 years Gods name was held up in earth in celebrations for lots and lots of ridicule, and booings.
Then out in Zions empire's rim from the holy cloning tanks they came, the martyred Holy Zion's death ticket holders young and old big and small.
And huge roars went up from the Holy crowds, as down to the battle locust they marched red hemmed glowing robes one and all.
Up into the sky the Locust Cherubim rose, millions upon millions in rows upon rows. Acrossed Zions black sky they rumbling came turning it pure white, Lucifer on Gods shattered throne and earths evil men, cried like babies and fled to earth in fright.

Part 2

And all the heavenly empire came down to weep, and watch over the bones of the dead to keep. And out of the ancient mighty shipyards of old, came new Zion all shiny and bold. And the over the wreckage and bones the resurrected dead and elders of old came down their prayers to pray. And not one soul in all the holy lands that day voted vengeance for their holy pearl harbor, Nay!
And mighty Zero Mass tugs rode out in front of the fleet to give the last sign before the closing bell. They fell on earth and her seas flowed up hill and mountains cracked and burned like hell. Now soon the people buried the drowned, and the dead, and when they were done and looked up into the black sky to see the stars were upside down over their heads. So the children of God were blamed for the Holy army above, and they fled to the corners of earth like a scared flock of doves.
Then the elders opened the book of 7 thunders and sang sad songs of horrors from wars ancient and old, down on earth came great rocks of iron, and and ice, sulfur blocks and other Radio active things not so nice, and even great nuclear lasers came down glittering like gold. Upon earth came the Ancient terrible planetary siege weapons fell, shown to unrepentant evil men one by one, as they turned earth into a living Hell.
The moon was moved in and earth quivered, and volcano's covered it with hot ash pitch black darkness as well. People crawled around in the darkness weeping looking for pale yellow plants to eat, and cried out for water, for in the darkness no rain ever fell because of the heat.

Then the iron locust came falling like glowing white snowflakes from the sky, and all the saints were swept away to the golden Zion fortress blazing in orbit on high.
And in the end no evil hearts were changed, the people who hated God were all burnt up a dead as the endless unstoppable Iron Locust marched silently over their burning corpses heads.
Then New Zion flashed out acrossed the black starry abyss, and for a 1000 years earths saints would see all the holy Empires planets and get from their people a hug and a kiss.

And Lucifer and minions were left in earths hot darkness to get bored and fight, with nothing to do but sit around and watch orange lava hiss into the raging black ocean for light.

This is my vision wrong or right from my sub-atomic nuclear work that in my heart I keep, and for all of earth my stolen work will slaughter...my heart will weep!
I may not be much...but through Heavens walls I do see...by the nuclear horrors God let be given to me!
Persecute laugh and mock me until the very end...it will not save you from one ounce of suffering in the end times destructions winds!

Comments

This is, obviously, Dark and Terrifying. It is written in a really interesting way and that made it readable for me. Could be a screenplay, and/or a book.
Interesting.
~ kestrel
 
Brings up an interesting point. How likely are the publishing trolls to lift blog pieces? And how much does it take to catch them?

My general assumption is that there's no way of knowing, either way. But I'm cynical...
 
Yes there is a bigger version coming :) which makes this pale by comparison. This is just a little teaser:D
 
This is great Mael.
You have a gift for conjuring powerful and lyrical scenes. I would love to read the bigger version.

Truly wonderful Mael.
 
Thanks qwerty, it was just a silly thing I dashed off for you guys, I have a bigger Book version coming hopefully, But fact checking the Bible is laborius I didn't log all the scattered hidden end of time texts in my laptop so I have to reread almost the whole bible again, to get things right.
 

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